Bekah, I like hoe you handled the subject's hair in the 3rd drawing. Treat it as one form... add the line work afterward. While the proportions on these are pretty good, continue to work on grounding the figure (feet)and shading the subject AND their surroundings. I think the range of line weight you're using could be broadened, as well. Some darker indications could bring forms out from the mass of the figure (hands in from of the torso, for instance).
Absolutely love the way you handled the hair in that first one! And... is that me down there on the bottom? You're as sneaky as I am! hehe >:-]
Thank you! And, hee! It is you! I'd hoped you wouldn't mind if I posted that one. :)
Bekah,
I like hoe you handled the subject's hair in the 3rd drawing. Treat it as one form... add the line work afterward. While the proportions on these are pretty good, continue to work on grounding the figure (feet)and shading the subject AND their surroundings. I think the range of line weight you're using could be broadened, as well. Some darker indications could bring forms out from the mass of the figure (hands in from of the torso, for instance).