Bekah, The first and last pages seem the strongest to me, although I like some of the shading you're doing in the other pages to indicate feather patterns. The pages I indicated have a really graceful line that really describes the forms and details of the bird in a few marks - they're not scratchy or hairy. Please keep this in mind when drawing people or places.
Incorporating the bird's surroundings (leaf patterns, branches) can help ground the subjects (if it's available in the video)
Great texture going on in some of these, like the way you did the feathers of the bottom bird in the first image.
Bekah,
The first and last pages seem the strongest to me, although I like some of the shading you're doing in the other pages to indicate feather patterns.
The pages I indicated have a really graceful line that really describes the forms and details of the bird in a few marks - they're not scratchy or hairy. Please keep this in mind when drawing people or places.
Incorporating the bird's surroundings (leaf patterns, branches) can help ground the subjects (if it's available in the video)
Good work.